IELTS Writing: Island Development
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Figure: The island before and after tourism development
The maps a small island before and after the developments carried out for tourism purposes.
Overall, it is clear that accommodation and other facilities for tourists and that a was constructed to permit access to the island by boat.
The island was originally undeveloped. A number of trees the northern and southern parts. In the central part, two separate accommodation areas were then built, consisting of simple arranged round a circular footpath.
Another footpath was constructed, leading to the on the western edge of the island. Access to the island was made possible by the construction of a pier, for tourists to land by boat.
A then connected the pier with the reception area. The track round the reception area and continued a very short distance to the restaurant.
Overall, it is clear that accommodation and other facilities for tourists and that a was constructed to permit access to the island by boat.
The island was originally undeveloped. A number of trees the northern and southern parts. In the central part, two separate accommodation areas were then built, consisting of simple arranged round a circular footpath.
Another footpath was constructed, leading to the on the western edge of the island. Access to the island was made possible by the construction of a pier, for tourists to land by boat.
A then connected the pier with the reception area. The track round the reception area and continued a very short distance to the restaurant.
Teacher’s Tips:
• Passive Voice: Dùng bị động (was/were + V3) cho các công trình. • Wound round: Uốn lượn quanh (quá khứ của wind).
Categories: Writing task 1
