IELTS Task 1 Masterclass: Brighton Attractions
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The graph illustrates the proportion of visitors to England who went to four different tourist attractions in Brighton between 1980 and 2010.
Overall, it is clear that the percentage visiting the Pier and the Pavilion over the period, while the proportion of visitors to the other attractions .
In 1980, only of tourists to England went to Brighton Pier. Despite some minor fluctuations, this figure from about 12% in 2000 to in 2010. The percentage visiting the Pavilion also , from in 1980 to almost in 1995. However, this figure then , to 35% in 2000 and then to about 30% in 2010, slightly than the Festival.
The most popular Brighton attraction in 1980 for visitors to England was the Festival. Although of these attended the Festival in 1980, by 2010 this percentage had slightly to . In 1980, the figure for visitors to the Art Gallery was 21%. It to a peak of , but this then dramatically to less than 10% in 2010. It was, therefore, the least popular of the attractions at the end of the period.
Overall, it is clear that the percentage visiting the Pier and the Pavilion over the period, while the proportion of visitors to the other attractions .
In 1980, only of tourists to England went to Brighton Pier. Despite some minor fluctuations, this figure from about 12% in 2000 to in 2010. The percentage visiting the Pavilion also , from in 1980 to almost in 1995. However, this figure then , to 35% in 2000 and then to about 30% in 2010, slightly than the Festival.
The most popular Brighton attraction in 1980 for visitors to England was the Festival. Although of these attended the Festival in 1980, by 2010 this percentage had slightly to . In 1980, the figure for visitors to the Art Gallery was 21%. It to a peak of , but this then dramatically to less than 10% in 2010. It was, therefore, the least popular of the attractions at the end of the period.
🚀 5 Band 9 Structures & Vocabulary
Từ vựng Illustrate: Động từ học thuật chuẩn để thay thế cho “show” khi mô tả biểu đồ.
Cấu trúc Despite some minor fluctuations: Mặc dù có một số biến động nhỏ (Cách mô tả xu hướng đi lên không thẳng tắp rất hay).
So sánh Slightly higher than: Cao hơn một chút (Mô tả sự chênh lệch nhỏ một cách chính xác thay vì chỉ dùng “higher”).
Cấu trúc Rose to a peak of: Tăng lên mức đỉnh điểm là… (Cấu trúc nhấn mạnh điểm cao nhất trong biểu đồ đường).
Trạng từ Decreased dramatically: Giảm một cách đáng kể/mạnh mẽ (Dùng trạng từ mạnh để mô tả độ dốc của biểu đồ).
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