IELTS Task 1 Masterclass: Book Expenditure
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The line graph compares the expenditure on books from 1995 to 2005 in four different countries.
Overall, it is clear that people in Germany on books than those in the other three countries. However, over the 10-year period, spending on books in all four countries.
In 1995, $80 million was spent on books in Germany. The spending figures for France and Italy were in 1995, at $55 million and $50 million, respectively, whereas the figure for Austria was at just $30 million. Despite some fluctuations, the amount of money spent on books in Germany continued to be higher than in the other countries throughout the period, and spending of almost $100 million in 2005.
There was a in the expenditure on books in France, and this finally reached a figure of $75 million in 2005. This was similar to the figure for Austria, where the money spent on books from $40 million in 2001 to $72 million in 2005. In Italy, spending on books saw a gradual increase during the 10 years, reaching a final figure of just over $60 million in 2005.
Overall, it is clear that people in Germany on books than those in the other three countries. However, over the 10-year period, spending on books in all four countries.
In 1995, $80 million was spent on books in Germany. The spending figures for France and Italy were in 1995, at $55 million and $50 million, respectively, whereas the figure for Austria was at just $30 million. Despite some fluctuations, the amount of money spent on books in Germany continued to be higher than in the other countries throughout the period, and spending of almost $100 million in 2005.
There was a in the expenditure on books in France, and this finally reached a figure of $75 million in 2005. This was similar to the figure for Austria, where the money spent on books from $40 million in 2001 to $72 million in 2005. In Italy, spending on books saw a gradual increase during the 10 years, reaching a final figure of just over $60 million in 2005.
💎 5 Band 9 Structures & Vocabulary
Cấu trúc A steady increase in…: Cách dùng danh từ giúp câu văn học thuật hơn thay vì chỉ dùng “increased steadily”.
Trạng từ Rose sharply: Mô tả sự tăng trưởng mạnh mẽ, đột ngột (Ghi điểm tuyệt đối cho tiêu chí mô tả xu hướng).
So sánh Whereas: Từ nối thần thánh dùng để so sánh hai vế đối lập trong cùng một câu (Trong khi đó…).
Cấu trúc Reached a peak of: Đạt đỉnh điểm tại mức… (Cấu trúc kinh điển để nhấn mạnh điểm cao nhất trên biểu đồ).
Trạng từ Respectively: Lần lượt là (Sử dụng khi liệt kê các con số tương ứng với các đối tượng đã nêu tên trước đó).
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