IELTS Task 1: US Marriage Statistics
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The bar charts the marriage and divorce in the USA over a 30-year period and the marital status of adult US citizens in 1970 and 2000.
Overall, while the number of marriages , the figure for divorces remained fairly stable. In addition, a of adult Americans were married in both of the years surveyed.
In 1970, there were couples who registered their marriages in the US while around 1 million got divorced. In 1980, the number of marriages stayed the same whereas that of divorces at just under 1.5 million cases. From then on, the marriage rate continued to before finishing at 2 million in 2000.
In 1970, the marital status of about of adult Americans was married, yet this figure decreased by 10% in 2000. By contrast, there was a slight growth in the of those who never married as well as a increase in the proportion of divorcees, from roughly 3% in 1970 to 9% in 2000.
Overall, while the number of marriages , the figure for divorces remained fairly stable. In addition, a of adult Americans were married in both of the years surveyed.
In 1970, there were couples who registered their marriages in the US while around 1 million got divorced. In 1980, the number of marriages stayed the same whereas that of divorces at just under 1.5 million cases. From then on, the marriage rate continued to before finishing at 2 million in 2000.
In 1970, the marital status of about of adult Americans was married, yet this figure decreased by 10% in 2000. By contrast, there was a slight growth in the of those who never married as well as a increase in the proportion of divorcees, from roughly 3% in 1970 to 9% in 2000.
🚀 5 Band 9 Structures & Vocabulary
Từ vựng Illustrate: Động từ học thuật cao để thay thế cho “show” (minh họa).
Cấu trúc Remained fairly stable: Giữ ở mức khá ổn định (cách mô tả xu hướng đi ngang cực hay).
So sánh Whereas: Từ nối thần thánh để so sánh hai vế đối lập trong cùng một câu (Trong khi đó…).
Tỷ lệ Threefold increase: Tăng gấp 3 lần (Dùng từ “threefold” chuyên nghiệp hơn “increased 3 times”).
Ngữ pháp Those who never married: Sử dụng đại từ quan hệ “those who” để chỉ một nhóm người cụ thể.