IELTS Task 1: Reasons for Study
Score: 0/8
The first bar chart different age groups of students in terms of whether they study for career or interest. The second chart illustrates employer support per age group.
Overall, a higher percentage of students under 40 study to their careers, whereas most over 50s study for interest. Those aged under 26 receive support from employers.
Although 80% of students under 26 study for career reasons, this proportion to 70% of those aged 26-29 and just under 60% for the 30-39 age group. Of those students aged 40-49, 40% study for their career while the proportion study for interest.
However, 70% of those aged 50 or above study for interest, compared with less than 20% who career-related studies.
The age group with the highest percentage of employer support are those under 26. Over 60% of these students are supported by employers, although the figure is still high for the 26-29 year-olds, of whom receive employer support. In contrast, the proportion of students who benefit from support are the 30-39 age group.
Overall, a higher percentage of students under 40 study to their careers, whereas most over 50s study for interest. Those aged under 26 receive support from employers.
Although 80% of students under 26 study for career reasons, this proportion to 70% of those aged 26-29 and just under 60% for the 30-39 age group. Of those students aged 40-49, 40% study for their career while the proportion study for interest.
However, 70% of those aged 50 or above study for interest, compared with less than 20% who career-related studies.
The age group with the highest percentage of employer support are those under 26. Over 60% of these students are supported by employers, although the figure is still high for the 26-29 year-olds, of whom receive employer support. In contrast, the proportion of students who benefit from support are the 30-39 age group.
🚀 5 Band 9 Structures & Vocabulary
Cấu trúc In terms of: Xét về mặt… (Dùng để giới thiệu tiêu chí so sánh trong Task 1).
Từ vựng Further their careers: Phát triển/thăng tiến sự nghiệp (Cực hay thay cho “improve careers”).
Từ vựng Declines steadily: Giảm một cách dần đều (Mô tả xu hướng mượt mà hơn từ “decrease”).
So sánh [Percentage] of whom: Cấu trúc mệnh đề quan hệ để lồng ghép số liệu cực kỳ ăn điểm ngữ pháp.
Từ vựng Pursue: Theo đuổi (Cụm từ “pursue studies” rất học thuật trong Writing).