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IELTS Writing Task 1: Online Shopping Sales
Hoàn thành bài mẫu so sánh doanh số mua sắm trực tuyến tại Canada (2005-2010).
[Biểu đồ tròn doanh số mua sắm trực tuyến 2005 và 2010]
The charts four retail sectors in Canada in terms of the proportion of their internet sales in two years, 2005 and 2010.
Overall, the proportion of online sales for each of the four sectors changed from 2005 to 2010. While the figures for food and beverages and also video games , the figures for the other two sectors fell.
In 2005, the proportion of online sales of food and beverages was 22%, but this to 32% in 2010. The percentage for internet sales of video games also went up, by from the 2005 figure of 18%.
In contrast, the percentages of the online sales of the other sectors decreased. The most dramatic was in the home furnishings retail sector. While this figure was 25% of the total online sales in 2005, it fell to just in 2010.
There was also a in the electronics and appliances sector, which saw a fall from 35% in 2005 to in 2010.
Lưu ý ngữ pháp (IELTS Grammar Tip)
– Number: Dùng cho danh từ đếm được số nhiều (v.d. the number of visitors). Không dùng cho %.
– Proportion: Dùng để mô tả tỷ lệ phần trăm (v.d. the proportion of people).
– Figure: Từ “vạn năng”, dùng được cho cả số đếm, % và danh từ không đếm được.
– Amount: Dùng cho danh từ không đếm được (v.d. the amount of money).
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