Technology in Communication
Date: March 2026 | Topic: Technology & Society
Đề bài
More and more businesses as well as individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than face to face. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating.
Bài làm học viên
In the digital age, the way people communicating1 has shifted from traditional face-to-face meetings to virtual platforms. While this development offers great convenience2, it also presents several drawbacks that need to be considered.
On the one hand, using technology for communication has many benefits. Firstly, it allows for instant connection with3 people regardless of their geographical location. For businesses, this means they can conduct international meetings through video calls, which saving a lot of time4 and travel costs. Secondly, technology provides a flexible5 for individuals to keep in touch with family and friends through social media or messaging apps, making it easy to share information quickly.
On the other hand, there are certain disadvantages to this trend. The primary concern is the lacks of personal touch6. In face-to-face interactions, body language and tone of voice play a crucial role in understanding, but these are often lost in digital messages. This can lead to misunderstanding between7 colleagues or friends. Furthermore, over-reliance on technology may cause people to feel lonely or socially isolated, as they spend less time to interact8 in the real world.
In conclusion, although communicating via technology is highly efficiency9 and cost-effective, it should not completely replace personal interaction. I believe that people should strike a balance between virtual and physical communication to maintain strong social relate10.
Chi tiết lỗi & Đề xuất
WORD FORM
“people communicating” → “people communicate”
Dùng động từ ở thì hiện tại đơn để diễn tả một sự thật/thực tế.
WORD FORM
“great convenience” → “great convenience”
Dùng danh từ (convenience) sau tính từ (great) là đúng, nhưng lỗi sai phổ biến là nhầm sang tính từ ‘convenient’.
PREPOSITION
“connection with” → “connection to”
Khi nói về kết nối kỹ thuật số/mạng, thường dùng ‘connection to’. ‘Connection with’ dùng cho mối quan hệ tình cảm.
S-V AGREEMENT
“which saving” → “which saves”
Mệnh đề quan hệ thay thế cho việc ‘conduct meetings’ (số ít) nên động từ phải chia.
WORD FORM
“a flexible” → “flexibility”
Sau mạo từ ‘a’ cần danh từ. Cấu trúc đúng: ‘provides flexibility for’.
GRAMMAR
“lacks of” → “lack of”
Khi là danh từ số ít ‘the lack of’, không thêm ‘s’.
NOUN NUMBER
“misunderstanding” → “misunderstandings”
Dùng số nhiều khi nói về các sự hiểu lầm nói chung.
VERB PATTERN
“time to interact” → “time interacting”
Cấu trúc: Spend time + V-ing.
WORD FORM
“highly efficiency” → “highly efficient”
Sau trạng từ ‘highly’ cần tính từ (efficient).
WORD FORM
“social relate” → “social relationships”
Cần danh từ để chỉ ‘mối quan hệ xã hội’.

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